Today my
grandpa was going to babysit me because my parents couldn’t find anyone else. When
my parents left I went to my room and started to play videogames 15 minutes
later I smell something burning so I went outside to check but my grandpa said “it
was okay.” So I went back in my room 2 minutes later my grandpa say “come out
dinners ready” I said to myself “how bad could it be” I went to the table see a
burnt pizza. It was all black I just couldn’t eat it so I told my grandpa that
eat it in my room he “okay” when I got to my room I threw it out the window
cool story but I found a couple of arrears
ReplyDelete-2nd sentence, you need a comma after the word room
-2nd sentence, you need a comma after the word video games
-2nd sentence, you need a comma after the word burning