HEAD WITH LEGS
One morning there was a box
in front of Jacob’s door. He brought inside, he didn’t know who sent it to him,
because it had no name of the person that sent it. Jacob was curious, he tried
to open but couldn’t so he asked his dad to help him. When they opened the saw
a red wooden head with legs sticking out of it. Suddenly it started to glow and
it
One morning there was a box in front of Jacob’s door. He brought it inside, he didn’t know who had sent it to him, because it had no name. Jacob was curious, he tried to open but couldn’t, he asked his dad to help him. When they opened it they saw a red, wooden head with legs sticking out of it. Suddenly it started to glow and it said, “I’m finally free”, Jacob’s dad put it back in the box and burned it. Then he threw it in to the ocean. THE END
ReplyDeleteI made slight alterations but good story!
cool story, I copied and pasted and made edits there, I think you should make these changes
ReplyDeleteOne morning there was a box in front of Jacob’s door. He brought inside, he didn’t know who sent it to him, because it had no name of the person that sent it. Jacob was curious, he tried to open but could not so he asked his dad to help him. When they opened the box, they saw a red wooden head with legs sticking out of it. Suddenly it started to glow and it said “I’m finally free!” Jacob’s dad put it back in the box and burned it then he threw it in to the ocean.